Friday, 19 May 2017

Collaboration in Writing

Last week Mattie observed classroom teaching to see how we are using collaboration to improve student writing. She made this video based on what she saw. I hope it gives you an idea of how teaching and learning takes place in Room 5.


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  2. Kia ora Room 5,
    It's great to have you back with us for Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu this term. I look forward to checking out the learning on your class blog and leaving you comments. I enjoyed watching how you collaborate to improve your writing in your video clip. I liked that you had turns at reading out the sentence and then working out where it went. It looked like you were doing really well at turn taking. Keep up the great work sharing your learning.
    Ma te wa

  3. Talofa lava, my name is Kayci and I am a student from Te waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you guys had a video about collaboration in writing. It made me think of how we do writing and sometimes we use collaboration. Have you thought about using more information to make it more interesting and add more details .If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http//

  4. Hi My name is Benson from Waikowhai Primary School I loved your video! It's great that guys work together in the class room! It made me think about our classroom, collaboration since we moved into the new building! Have you thought about using more details and information! If would like to visit my blog my blog is!

    See Ya!

  5. Hi my name is Lau from Saint Pius X, I love the video, it was nice good work keep it up.

  6. Good morning Room 5,
    My name is Lusia and I'm a year 8 student from St Pius X Catholic School.
    I like how you collab with students that need abit of help with their improvements.I think that is a creative way to help others with their learning. Great job Room 5!

  7. Hello Room 5
    My name is Henrietta and I go to Saint Pius X Catholic School in Glen Iness.
    I really like the way how you guys were helping each other out with your learning.

    Keep up the great work Room 5.

  8. Hola Room 5! My name is Lavinia from Waikowhai Primary School. I am in the class Te Waka Ako. I liked how you guys showed how working together can help each other through life. It made me think about how helping each other is another way to express your friendship with them. If you want to see my blog head to this website to find out more,