Thursday, 30 October 2014
Tuesday, 28 October 2014
Monday, 20 October 2014
In Room 5 has been focusing on building up their descriptive and figurative language around certain moods. Here are some of the best sentences
My nervousness began to shrink. It was as if I was getting a new skin. I shrugged away my shyness.
getting ready to preform
We were standing in line like soldiers, waiting for power to come on us."Hopi, Kiraro!" Mana called like a chief above us. We were all in position, following his commands like trained warriors.
We waited for the curtains to open again... 3, 2, 1 The curtains began to open! Right there in front of us was a massive, cheering crowd. It was like we were presenting on X Factor.
I wanted to sink into my own world and disappear
There I stood, as timid as a mouse.
Proud of myself
“Hopi! Kiraro! Hopi!” I could see tiny little tears coming out the side of my whanaus eyes
I was so nervous, eels twisting and turning inside my stomachWalking onto the stage it felt like my tummy was a tuna net that eels were trying to slip out of. I was feeling nervous.
The excitement grew inside me like a dog knowing it is about to get a feed.
All eyes were on me, if I made a mistake it would haunt me